I really enjoyed the way the characters and their relationship was slowly progressing but then when they finally realize what's been in front of their faces the entire time everything just whooshes by and I felt left behind. I also found the phrasing used during the sex a little awkward, I kept stumbling over phrasing like 'piss slit'. I don't care who you are that's just not sexy. I loved these guys and I was happy that they got together but I think the story would've resonated more if we'd spent less time on the history and more time on the present. But over all these guys were hot and very sweet together.